Wednesday, January 19, 2011

Expository Writing Greg and Ponyboy differences

Both Ponyboy Curtis and Greg Heffley are trying to fit in with different peer  groups.  Ponyboy tries to fit in with the other Greasers even though he likes to read books, watches movies and has a high IQ.  Ponyboy likes to act like a Greaser by dressing and the way he talks.  Greg will do anything to fit in with the other people of his new school. He joined lots of different clubs trying to fit in, it didn’t work out to well.  He told his best friend that he thought that he dressed weird and if they were going to get popular anytime soon that he needs to get some new and better clothes and to stop acting like a little kid because they are in middle school now.

Ponyboy and Greg are both being bullied in their peer groups throught their stories but in very different ways.   Ponyboy is bullied by the Socs (The other Gang) another greaser named Steve Randal and his brother Darry Curtis.  He has been bullied by the socs the worst, Hew was jumped by them they cut him and cut off clumps of his hair.  Greg is bullied at his new middle school by the other students.  they wouldn’t let him sit at their tables  or include him in anything.  Steve Randal calls Ponyboy a kid and thinks that he is a tag along.  Greg is mostly bullied by this girl that he has known for a while her name is Patty she would always bully Greg  because Greg used to call her names in Kinder garden.  She threatened to beat him up many times, Greg was also bullied by the teens in the red truck.  They wanted ti “kill” them after they accidentally scratched the teens red truck. It all started after when they soaked Greg and his friend with water then Greg yelled at them that he was going to call the cops on them.

From what I know about Ponyboy and Greg Heffley is,  that neither of them ever use their heads before they act or say anything.  Greg was jealous of Rowley making a new friend and he wanted to make Rowley jealous so he went and asked Fregly if he wanted to have a sleep over and he went there and he knew that Fregly was a crazy kid he still went to Fregly’s house and Fregly chased him with a booger.  One of the times when Ponyboy didn’t use his head as when he was walking alone in the lot. He got jumped by the other gang, the Socs.   

Even though Greg and Ponyboy are Two very different people they do share some similarities with each other.

Thursday, November 25, 2010

Amazing Floating Egg Lab

Ingredients
Observation of egg in water before adding ingredients
# of teaspoons added
Observations when ingredient added
Observation when water carefully added
Salt









The egg sank





6 Teaspoons were added


The egg floats


The egg sinks slowly when the water is added
Epsom Salt



The egg sank







6 Teaspoons were added



The egg floats



The egg sinks slowly when the water is added
Sugar



The egg sank








8 Teaspoons were added



The egg floats



The egg sinks slowly when the water is added
Baking Soda




The egg sank






5 Teaspoons were added



The egg floats



The egg sinks slowly when the water is added


Diagram

Conclusion: I Noticed that when you got to about 5 teaspoons the egg started to float.
                         Because the ingredients made the water more dense than the egg.

Tuesday, November 23, 2010

Report Card Response

I'm not very happy with my report card. My marks weren't very good, I am going to have to work harder and study more. Although, some of the marks I got on things were pretty good. I would still like to improve on getting good marks in Term 2.

Thursday, November 18, 2010

Daniels Story Expository Writing: Daniel

Daniels Expository Writing: Daniel


So Daniel you survived the holocaust... can you tell me is how bad was the smell of the camps you were sent to? It says in your story that it smelled like rotten and burning bodies of human flesh.
My second question is about your pain of losing family members. Now I know how you feel I have lost family members to. So how did it feel in this situation to lose a family member.


My third question is. Well I cant relate to this but, what was the first thing that crossed your mind when you saw that little boy gunned down on the street? My fourth question is. can you tell me did you feel revenge when you killed those German guards on the day you were liberated? Was it a sense of revenge?or maybe payback? for what they have done to your family and friends?


My fifth question is. What was the first thing that you thought when you saw Rosa sitting and reading on the chair by your old ghetto? Did you feel happy? or even Surprised? My sixth question is. What did you feel when your father said when you were about to kill the downed Nazi? Did you want to listen to your dad? Do you disagree in anyway? Do you still think about that moment?


Ok My seventh question is What have you been doing since you were liberated? Have you been going around to schools and doing presentations? Thank you for letting me ask my questions.




Noah Fraser

Daniels Story Expository Writing Planing: Daniel